swordkill's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Newgrounds Information]

Gems?

Very good, however, I don't recall EVER seeming a NG gem. EVER.

Phil responds:

A Viewing Trophy

[pro racing]

Very good

This is a very fun and easy game. I think you have done well with this.

However, a few imrovements are needed:

1) you can just turn around and go through the finish line on timed mode. to fix this, I would place 'checkpoints' on the track, that the player would have to pass through before going through the finish line.

2) you have left and right the wrong way round in the instructions part

3) a white line follows the car. Is that meant to be there?

4) you can get past the barrier, and then you can drive freely in a green space. A serious problem.

I hope you have found this review helpful. I would be very pleased to see a possbile sequel with these problems fixed.

andy70707 responds:

okay, thanks for the review:

1) you can just turn around and go through the finish line on timed mode. to fix this, I would place 'checkpoints' on the track, that the player would have to pass through before going through the finish line.
yeah good point

2) you have left and right the wrong way round in the instructions part

ohh thanks for pointing that out

3) a white line follows the car. Is that meant to be there?

yeah thats supposed to be the "skid marks"

4) you can get past the barrier, and then you can drive freely in a green space. A serious problem.

I couldn't be bothered hittesting the entire green space. sorry!

[Shock Space]

Intersting, but the name...

The game seems TOO good, I can't help but feel that this may be stolen.

Pharanphalia responds:

PLZ RECOMMEND TO COLLECTION (SHOOTING)

[ActionScript Tutorial 1]

good tutorial

i mean, all the info is here, it's just that it's a bit hard to understand

Magosis responds:

might be, honestly i don't even remeber what all i covered about variables here.

[RPG Battle SystemTutorial]

exelent

i would HAVE to give this a ten, it's just exelent and it really helped me out with flash. keep up the good work!

mercygames responds:

thanks!

[How to eat with sticks]

?

hey, what language was that anyway?

MadieHansen responds:

swedish